Saturday, January 28, 2012

Love Story by Jen

The pain reaches a peak never retreating, my mountains have become plateaus.

I sweat, yell and push.

Placed in my arms, I look into her eyes and know that I am hers forever.

9 comments:

  1. Awesome! Oh how I sort of remember those feelings ...

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  2. Gorgeous story! It takes me back 21 years to my "her".

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  3. My mountains have become plateaus...well put. I don't know if I was lucky I missed that part of it (no contractions, decelerating heartbeat --> c-section). It was different for me but once they placed him in my arms....wow! This is beautiful. Thanks.

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  4. Welcome to the challenge, Jen. This clearly resonated with a lot of people. It was beautifully told. I hope you'll be back to join us for our weekday challenge starting on Monday.

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