Thanks for joining up for this week's challenge. We asked for three sentences, we asked for brevity and we asked you to engage us. You certainly ticked all three boxes! I like how you close the story, but leave us wondering who it was...
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And now I need to know who's face it was, and what she cancelled. Hooked!
ReplyDeleteahhhh - so much in three sentences. I am often not surprised by obituaries, either. Nicely done Evy.
ReplyDeleteMade me think therapist...but maybe I'm wrong. :)
ReplyDeleteoh, sad piece.
ReplyDeletebest,
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i love the intrigue, and that I'm left to wonder if the client killed herself or someone else!
ReplyDeleteThis is so succinct and so strong. Great story!
ReplyDeleteOh, no.
ReplyDeleteConcise. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for joining up for this week's challenge. We asked for three sentences, we asked for brevity and we asked you to engage us. You certainly ticked all three boxes! I like how you close the story, but leave us wondering who it was...
ReplyDeleteHopefully you'll join us again for next week's challenge