Saturday, February 4, 2012

Bitter by Anonymous

She didn’t stop to think who would have to clean up all the blood—God, so much blood everywhere—or maybe she did stop to think about it.

The note read: “Marc, I can’t do it anymore. I’m sorry.”
at 3:17 PM

5 comments:

  1. AmeliaFebruary 4, 2012 at 11:11 PM

    So so sad.

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  2. Kim Bongiorno at Let Me Start By SayingFebruary 5, 2012 at 5:37 AM

    Ooh. I can't decide if this is in her voice or Marc's or a 3rd party's, which makes me like it even more.
    Came from the Trifecta link.

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  3. SatuFebruary 5, 2012 at 9:58 AM

    I like the perspective of this omniscient narrator because at the beginning it makes you think she killed somebody (not herself).

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  4. JennaFebruary 5, 2012 at 1:13 PM

    very mysterious, and sad too. great capturing in 3 sentences!!

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  5. TrifectaFebruary 6, 2012 at 2:33 AM

    Thanks for joining up for Trifextra Week 2. I love the twist at the end of this - I saw this as murder when I read line one and line three caught me by surprise. Having a twist in a 3-sentence story is quite an achievement! Hope you'll be back to play for the weekday challenge.

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