Sunday, June 17, 2012

What Have We Done? by Joanne Edith

What have we done?

Our Garden of Eden, devolved into a paved paradise

Our children, forgotten aside ferrite fences

While barely-a-livestock, forced to ferret feed from crevices

What have we done?

5 comments:

  1. Thank you so much for linking up to Trifextra this weekend. The challenge this weekend will be judged by the community. So please come back to the Trifecta home page and click the stars next to the three posts you most enjoyed. You only have until Monday at 8 am EST, so hurry!

    ReplyDelete
  2. I enjoyed the "barely alive stock".

    ReplyDelete
  3. It does make me stop and wonder what went wrong. It doesn't seem that paradise should be paved.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Excellent response...wish I'd wrote it!

    ReplyDelete