Friday, March 9, 2012

FKC

She blacked out, not knowing for how long. She came to, lying on the avenue with her knees pressed to her chest. Looking up, she saw a bus pressed to her shins. "Help!"

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  1. I would use an exclamation mark if a bus were on top of me! nice job.

    best,
    MOV

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  2. Thanks for joining us! I still can remember a tersely worded blog entry: Please tell me a bus didn't just run over me.

    Love ya!

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  3. I think I might have lost control of my bowels at that point.

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  4. Nice imagery. Well, unless you're there. Well done.

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  5. Thank you everyone. I was there. For my first try I figured I would "write what I knew."

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    1. Great try then. But the word help seems a little tame for the tenseness of the situation. Evelyn

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  6. Thank you for linking up to Trifecta this weekend. Welcome aboard. I think that a bus on top of you definitely warrants an exclamation. Hope to see you back again soon.

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