Saturday, February 4, 2012

Untitled by Anonymous

the baby died.
he was secretly relieved.
it would've been their fifth.

10 comments:

  1. Wow. This is an incredible kick in the gut. Well done.

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  2. Inner thoughts revealed can be so devastatingly honest.

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  3. Very bitter. Kind of makes me sad and mad at the same time.

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  4. Wow, guess he best keep those thoughts to himself. This piece is haunting to me.

    best,
    MOV

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  5. i agree with dbs on the inner thoughts. brutal, this one!

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  6. Thanks for linking up to the weekend challenge. Wow, this is quite a doozy. Although we're probably supposed to sympathize with this guy and appreciate his honesty, as a mother I can't help but feel anger towards him. You've given us a lot of emotion in a very short space. Nicely done. Hope you'll come back on Monday.

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